ext_6510 ([identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002007-10-24 12:47 am

a Dining Out drabble: "Almost Candlelit" PG

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Title: Almost Candlelit.
Challenge: Primeval100’s “Dining out” challenge.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None come to mind.
Genre: drabble.
Word Count: 95.
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine.

Short Summary: Her POV on a romantic evening.
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The ‘candles’ were lit strings coiled up in cups filled with oil from a bird or pterosaur.

How had he done this?

The table was a broad flat boulder that’d been strenuously polished and cleaned til it shone.

We haven’t been here that long, surely.

The meat had been cooked medium-well and…she decided not to inquire as to just what it had been.

Overhead, the first stars were coming out, very early in the evening.

I didn’t know he felt this way.

“I’m flattered,” Claudia said to him beside her, “Captain Ryan, but –“

“Thomas.”
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The End.
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2007-10-24 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant! I certainly didn't see that ending coming :)