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mayakittenreads ([personal profile] mayakittenreads) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002012-02-28 08:44 pm

Sticks and Stones

Title: Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones - But Word Can Bring Me Down
Author: [livejournal.com profile] mayakitten
Character: Caroline
Rating: Teen for insults
A/N: For prompt #251 Sticks and Stones.


She heard it every time she came in to the ARC for a debriefing. The whispers dogged her every step, following her until she couldn’t escape it. Time and time again.

“Bitch.”

“Whore.”

“Temptress.”

“Traitor.”

“Black widow.”

Over and over again they spoke until she dreamed the words. Men, women, soldiers, scientists, they all said it, thinking that she couldn’t hear them. She always did though.

The only person who didn’t join in was Connor. He didn’t say anything at all.

Caroline could only hope the debriefings finished before the words broke her.

If Connor’s silence didn’t break her first.


[identity profile] kayim.livejournal.com 2012-02-28 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
I don't much like Caroline, but I feel so sorry for her here :(

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-02-28 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Caroline! This is really believable. Makes you feel sorry for her without excusing what she did!
ext_27141: (PriWriMo Connor)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-02-28 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
This is brilliant!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-28 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
great use of the prompt.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-02-28 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
You've almost made me feel sorry for Caroline here!
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] emily merchant)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-03-06 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor Caroline!