http://freddiejoey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002013-04-19 09:31 pm

A Great Stink

Title: A Great Stink

Characters: Emily, Nick, Becker, Abby and Connor.

Rating: PG

Word Count: 100

Challenge: 311 - In The Sewers




What explodes forth from the giant, arthropod creature, when Becker shoots it, is slimey, sallow-yellow and reeking.

Connor turns ashen.

Abby firmly clutches her nose.

Becker’s hair seems overwrought.

Even intrepid Professor Cutter looks rather queasy for a moment.

Yet Emily strides straight up, totally undaunted.

Prodding at the noxious guts with the toe of her boot.

Nick grins, bemused.

“Have you no sense of smell Em? Not a wee sniff?”

Emily smiles complacently and twinkles.

“Two things you’re forgetting Professor. I’ve survived the Great Stink of 1858 - London’s sewers overflowing. And the other………..I live with Matt’s dirty socks.”

[identity profile] 47eleven.livejournal.com 2013-04-19 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
This is an awesome use of the prompt :D
Edited 2013-04-19 12:06 (UTC)

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2013-04-19 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it! Great tie to history with the prompt.

Becker’s hair seems overwrought.

Ehehehe. :)

[identity profile] misa-ffection.livejournal.com 2013-04-19 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*cackles* Brilliant. :D

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-19 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant!

Becker’s hair seems overwrought. No! Poor hair ;)

LOL over Matt's dirty socks.

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2013-04-20 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee hee! Nicely done
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] armed!becker)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2013-04-21 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, great descriptions!

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2013-04-23 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*snorts* Hilarious. It must have been bad if even Becker's hair couldn't cope. Go Emily!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2013-04-27 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Love the description of Becker's hair.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2013-04-28 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol!