[identity profile] tseecka.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] primeval100
Title: Erasure
Prompt: 116: TLC
Characters: Nick/Stephen
Rating: PG
Spoilers: The end of series 1, if you squint real hard. 

 

He smoothes away the lines in Nick's forehead, brushes the hair from his brow. His fingers trace, caress, the stubbled cheek, memorizing every line etched by worry, and hurt, and betrayal--his own rued mistakes. Gently, he smoothes those away, too, wishing he could erase those cares as easily, thoughtlessly, as he put them there.

 

Not gentle enough--Nick wakes, fixes him with a glare. His hand rests tentatively on Nick's cheek, unmoving; their eyes meet. He pleads without words.

 

Take me in your arms; hold me again. Let me fix this. Let me love you...

 

Nick rolls over pointedly, shrugging away Stephen's tender hand.

Date: 2009-07-28 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Waaaah! Oh, that's heartbreaking! *sobs*

Date: 2009-07-28 08:20 am (UTC)
ext_27141: (Love Me)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
But...but...but...

*breaks*

Date: 2009-07-28 09:06 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-07-28 09:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
*whimpers*
That's so sad.

Date: 2009-07-28 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Waaaah! Gorgeous writing -- and it made me snivel!

Date: 2009-07-28 12:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
That's sad.

Date: 2009-07-28 11:27 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (lucy brown)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
*sobs* Oh, oh, :(

Beautifully written.

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