Challenge 121: Want, Take, Have: 3 drabbles - Miscommunication

[raptor-moon.livejournal.com]

 

Title: Miscommunication

Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge 121: Want, Take, Have
Characters: Danny, Connor, Abby and Jenny
Warnings: none
Spoilers: S3

Disclaimer: Not mine, No money made, Wish they would make more…

 

 

 

Want

 

Abby had finally decided that she wanted a real relationship and she wanted it with Connor. She was ready to take things to the next level, but he seemed content just being flatmates again. She would have to give him hints.

 

“Connor, are you up and ready, I’ll give you a ride?” she asked wandering into his bedroom.

 

“It’s really hot today, fancy an ice lolly?” She asked, licking sensuously down its length.

 

“I know it’s been a long, hard day for you…fancy a bedtime backrub?” she suggested.

 

But Connor was already deep in exhausted sleep. So much for subtlety!

 

 

Take

 

Connor wanted to get Abby to kiss him again, to know it wasn’t just a thank you gesture. He decided to take Abby out for a real date. He would just have to get up the nerve.

 

“Abby, I want to show you how I feel…” his words were drowned out by the alarms of the ADD.

 

“Can I take you out…” his words were cut off by the roar of a T-rex!

 

“I know it’s late, but I have to know…will you go out with me?” Connor finally asked, but as was Abby fast asleep, no answer was forthcoming.

 

 

Have

 

The romantic dinner was everything Connor had wanted to give to Abby: wine, candlelight, gourmet food and dancing under a starlit sky.

 

They returned to the flat. Abby waited for Connor to take her upstairs to make passionate love, but he stopped her on the bottom step.

 

“Abby, I love you. May I kiss you?” he stammered.

 

“Connor, I love you too.” Perhaps he just needed to hear that, “You can do more than kiss me.”

 

His eyes got wide and he swallowed nervously, blushing. “I wouldn’t know how…I’ve never…”

 

“Then I’ll just have to show you…” and she did.

Comments

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Awww! Thank goodness they managed to get onto the same wavelength by the end :-D

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwww... Also hee! Life is such a parade of interruptions, isn't it? *g*

[raptor-moon.livejournal.com]

Yes, Always too many interruptions...

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

They managed it at last!

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Awww, finally! They're such a cute couple.

[wilemina-29.livejournal.com]

Oooh oooh! Yay Connor and Abby goodness, so sweet, they finally managed to get there in the end.

I've been writing my fic for most of the day and that was a welcome break. Thanks for a great read. :-)

[raptor-moon.livejournal.com]

An abbreviated innuedo fic for you...to apologize for the velociraptor line...

[raptor-moon.livejournal.com]

innuendo... can't type today!

[wilemina-29.livejournal.com]

I told you there was no need to apologise! It was a great line, I put it in, did ya see? As for the typo's, I hadn't noticed, I always find it weird how I read and re-read my fics anout ten times to check for mistakes before posting, but the second I post, I notice loads! I think there's a little gremlin that re-arranges the words lol.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Yay for them finally getting together. Aww.

Apology

[raptor-moon.livejournal.com]

I'm glad folks like the drabbles and sincerely hope the multitude of grammatical errors did not detract too much. I have fixed them now (I hope) and I apologise to everyone who has already read it. I posted it early before rushing off to work. When I read it again upon returning home, I found all the errors. Blah!

[6th-dr.livejournal.com]

yours are always a fun reads errors or not

[szychogirl.livejournal.com]

YAY! Just love reading about Connor and Abby finally getting together. Watching the series was just torture... will they, won't they? It's nice to have these drabbles to make all those questions disappear!

Grammatical errors. I always seem to find them after posting, you are not alone! No biggie. ;)

Good job!

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, very nice :D