ext_109323 ([identity profile] spirited-lizard.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002010-01-21 09:21 pm

Challenge #142, Nick Cutter

Title: Love and death
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: #142 “Nick Cutter”
Character(s)/Pairing: Nick



When Nick Cutter was a teenager, he never thought much about death. He was young, he thought all doors stood open for him. And he wanted to enter through all of them.

His grandparents died when he had just entered college. This was the first time when he experienced real loss. And it almost tore him apart. He never wanted to feel like that again.

He loved Helen deeply, and would have never thought that she would betray him in every way he could think of.

And he would’ve never thought that this love would kill him in the end.

[identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Very powerful, poor Nick.

[identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, that's lovely... poor Nick!

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek! That's very powerful. Excellent drabble.
fififolle: (Primeval - Nick sands of time)

[personal profile] fififolle 2010-01-21 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Nick.*sigh*
Good drabble!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-01-21 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Meep for poor Nick. Very nice drabble.

[identity profile] slashybits.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
*wibble*

Oh that's heartbreaking!

Beautifully done!
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2010-01-22 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch. Poor Nick. Good drabble :)

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2010-01-22 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Meep!
And the last sentence is so true!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2010-01-25 11:42 am (UTC)(link)
Very nicely done!

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2010-01-25 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, poor Nick.

[identity profile] amphetamine-47.livejournal.com 2010-01-25 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Nick :*(