ext_111294 ([identity profile] paranoiaheights.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002008-03-05 07:20 pm

Smoke and Mirrors (challenge 44)

Title: Smoke and Mirrors
Rating:
PG
Characters/Pairing:
Abby/Connor- unrequited
Word Count:
122
Spoilers: None
Summary:
  His love for her is unrequited, but he doesn't want it to be forever.
Notes: My first ever drabble, so that's why it's so rubbish and over 100 words. Oh well!

“Abby, I, I know this isn’t what you want to hear, and this isn’t the right place to say it, that’s why I’m going to keep it short.”
 
Brushing back his hair slightly as he spoke, Connor smiled.
 
“Ever since I met you, I loved you, really. Really, I did, and I know it’s going to sound strange, but you know I have, I’ve made it so public and er…”
 
He struggled, swallowing hard, thinking for the right words to say.
 
“Yeah… I love you, that’s pretty much it.”
 
And as he stepped backwards a little, he looked at himself in the mirror and the door behind him opened, Abby stepping through followed by a pleased looking Stephen.
 
Connor blinked. “Of course…”

[identity profile] missyvortexdv.livejournal.com 2008-03-05 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww. Quite cute, though angsty. Your connor voice is good too. Densely packed emotionally for jsut the 100 words, good job.

Also *glomps you for writing Abby/Connor*

[identity profile] missyvortexdv.livejournal.com 2008-03-05 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Now pokes you to put on the ARC ;) (especially since the ship pairings section is so small)
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[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2008-03-05 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*huggles Connor*

Bless... :-D

It's not rubbish! Don't sell yourself short!
Edited 2008-03-05 20:22 (UTC)
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2008-03-05 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet! Poor Connor :)
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2008-03-05 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, that was nice and angsty. And very good for your first attempt.

You now have a shiny new author tag! And if you could keep your future drabbles nearer 100 words that would be lovely. ;)

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2008-03-06 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww, sweet. Lovely little angsty unrequited love fic. *huggles Connor*. Really good for a first drabble.

[identity profile] butter-cup27.livejournal.com 2008-03-06 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, poor Connor. He's so sweet. This was great! ;D

[identity profile] doodlesquiggle.livejournal.com 2008-03-06 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww!
Poor Con, that seemed so sweet! Must write more, my friend!