Challenge 150: Bedtime Stories

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Title: Once Upon A Time
Word Count: (100)
Rating: 12
Challenge: 150: Bedtime Stories
Characters/Pairing: James Lester/Tom Ryan


"Once upon a time..."

"I hope this story isn't suitible for children!" Ryan commented.

"There was a brave, dashing and impatient soldier who protected his land."

"Dashing am I?"

Lester snorted.

"After battling a fearsome creature, the soldier was horribly wounded but as a reward when he healed, his king..."

"King?" Ryan laughed, gasping as he pulled his stitches.

James raised an eyebrow.

"Please continue, your Majesty!"

"Took a week off and chained the hero to his bed, doing creative, naughty and possibly scandalous things to the soldier."

"I look forward to the happy ending."

Fond look. "So do I."

Comments

[rustydog.livejournal.com]

Ha, this is wonderful! Really good use of a dialogue style drabble, and so fun. :)

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Loved it, especially the fond look *bg*

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*g* Thanks

[fredbassett]

That was fabulous! The dialogue was great and the affection between the two of them practically leapt off the page!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

I'm glad it worked, I wanted Lester to come across as snarky but affectionate

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

EEEE!! *flails happily*

That was adorable and silly and great fun. Did I mention adorable?

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Hee! *happily watches Jay flail* I'm glad you enjoyed it

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

*squishes you*

That was gorgeous!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*grins at being squished*

I'm happy you liked it :)

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Ooh, totally squishy and adorable -- I think I like the last two lines best!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thanks

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

"Took a week off and chained the hero to his bed, doing creative, naughty and possibly scandalous things to the soldier."

Hee! Nice :-)

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*g* Thanks

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

Lol I love the way Ryan keeps interrupting :D

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

He's enjoying teasing Lester *g*

[bella-farfalla.livejournal.com]

EEEE yum yum yum!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*g* I'm glad you enjoyed it

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm. Love the story and the last two lines.

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

WIN!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Yay! \o/

[cordeliadelayne]

Hee! Very nicely done :D

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[fififolle]

That is too damn cute!!!
♥ ♥ ♥

*claps so hard my hands hurt*

Edit: also, 'possibly scandalous' was just the best phrase ever *BG*

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*huge grin* Thanks for such a great comment.

Possibly scandalous is rather fun (so is thinking about what he could be planning)

[silver_sun]

Very nice :D

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[madcatt82.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwww! Love the dialogue between the boys!

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Thank you :)

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

I think maybe he already has his happy ending.

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

Awwww! I think he does too :)

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

LOL, and also a little bit awwww.

[slashybits.livejournal.com]

*g* That was what I was going for