ext_18553 ([identity profile] slashybits.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002010-06-29 04:36 pm

Challenge 164: Bones

Title: Foreboding
Word Count: (100)
Rating: 12
Challenge: #164: Bones
Characters/Pairing: James Lester
Warnings: References to 1.6



James Lester wasn't one for foreboding or 'gut feelings', he used observation and logic.

There was no reason for him to have woken up during the night in a cold sweat with an overwhelming feeling of dread.

As he stood near the anomaly, the feeling returned but he couldn't pinpoint why.

He didn't think it was their encounter with a super predator from the future, or the presence of Helen Cutter.

Their plan to return the young predators to the past made sense.

And yet...

He felt something terrible was going to happen. He could feel it in his bones.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
Erk!

*Sticks fingers in ears. Lalalalalalalalala, didn't happen!*

Scarily vivid drabble.
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2010-06-29 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
Eeekk!! Scary!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 08:44 am (UTC)(link)
Vividly written!

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
EEK!

Scary drabble is scary. And Lester having hunches, wot!

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek! Loved the first sentence.
*dials Denial*

[identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh. ::shivers:: I feel like I'm right there, and I like the characterization of Lester.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
meep!

[identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeep listen to your gut Lester!
ext_27141: (Lester Phone)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
He should say something!

Great drabble :)

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no.

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Scary...

[identity profile] rain-sleet-snow.livejournal.com 2010-06-29 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
*squeaks and hides under the table* That's a scarily vivid drabble.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-06-30 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Meep.

(of course, Lester contacts Ryan to call the whole thing off *nods*)
cordeliadelayne: (abby and cutter)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2010-07-03 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Oh noes!