ext_109323 ([identity profile] spirited-lizard.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002011-03-03 08:45 pm

New old feelings (Challenge #200)

Title: New old feelings
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: #200 “Past Prompts”
Character(s)/Pairing: Nick/Jenny
Authors Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] primeval100, Challenge #200 “Past Prompts”. Prompt used #50 “Desire”.

“She is not Claudia. She is not…”

Over and over, Nick repeated this sentence to himself, closing his eyes and concentrating on Claudia; her features, her voice. Although, all this was Jenny now, too. And it was her he couldn’t stop thinking about. He had to make himself clear that it wasn’t Jenny who returned his feelings, but what was in his head was only a memory of Claudia.

Still, he couldn’t help himself. When Jenny was near him, he felt good. Nick had to ask himself, was he falling in love with Jenny?

“She is not Claudia. She is…”

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2011-03-03 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this! Sometimes Nick's actions towards Jenny seemed very callous, but this looks inside his head!
ext_27141: (Claudia)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2011-03-03 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice :)

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2011-03-03 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor bloke, it can't have been easy for him... Nice drabble :-)
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2011-03-03 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Nick!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-03-03 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Nick, it couldn't have been easy for him.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2011-03-06 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh, poor Nick, great look inside his thoughts.
cordeliadelayne: (side stephen)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2011-03-07 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, bless the poor man.