Every Atom - Challenge 200 - Past Prompts - Devastation

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Title : Every Atom
Author : Danae Bowen/ Sunspecops/ Roguie
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : K/G
Characters : Abby, Connor
Disclaimer: I so obviously don't own Primeval; I just like to borrow the characters and mutate their inner voices. Please don't sue, my house is small, my car is useless and my dogs are pains in the arse, but they're all I have.
Spoilers : 4X05 - that lovely little scene I tend to watch over and over. :D
Summary : Written for Primeval100 Challenge 200, Past Prompts - Challenge #21, Devastation

 

 

He thought it would be bit by bit; a tiny piece of his heart stripped away every minute until there was nothing left but the pain. He could’ve gotten used to it that way, assimilated, accepted it.

Instead, everything ripped away from him in a second; air ripped from his lungs, blood gone from his veins. His entire consciousness focussed on the rushing of sound in his ears and the world around him grew weak as he doubled over, his every atom focussed on the gaping wound in his chest where his heart had once beat.

“Her signal’s right there.”

~~Fin

 

Comments

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

*wibble*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Meep

[echo-fangirl.livejournal.com]

*wibbles and hides*

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

meep! Poor Connor.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Meep!

[cordeliadelayne]

Eeek!