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Title: A Pleasant Picnic
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Challenge: 278, Picture Prompt
Characters/Pairing: Danny
Warnings: Mild animal violence
Spoilers: Series 3 finale


Life in the Pliocene was no picnic.

The days were long and dry, leaving him parched. The nights were even longer and colder, only a small fire providing him warmth.

He scrounged what edible vegetation he could find. When he was really lucky, he found a rat or other rodent to kill.

The worst part was the isolation. With no other intelligent life around him, he resorted to chatting with his walking stick.

But sometimes, when he stayed up to watch the sun paint the sky a myriad of colors over the pristine landscape, Danny found life was almost pleasant.

Date: 2012-09-04 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Nice look at Danny lost in the past. Is that the first Molly?

Date: 2012-09-04 08:35 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (PriWriMo - Danny 2)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Lovely imagery at the end.

Date: 2012-09-04 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prehistoriccat.livejournal.com
Nice to find something to keep you feeling positive in even the worst of circumstances *hugs Danny*

Edited Date: 2012-09-04 08:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-09-04 10:54 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (Danny)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
Poor Danny, he must've had a horrible time stuck there by himself (although he had Molly, of course *g*). Nice look at him. :-)

Date: 2012-09-06 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Well done.

Date: 2012-09-11 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Great look at Danny's time in the past.

Date: 2012-09-15 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
I like the image of Danny talking to his stick!

Date: 2012-09-23 12:21 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] blue background stephen)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, nice look at Danny.

Date: 2012-09-24 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com
Really lovely!

Date: 2012-09-24 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com
fabulous look at primeval life through Danny's eyes

Date: 2012-09-24 02:42 am (UTC)
ext_99403: (Ben Larry beard)
From: [identity profile] zoi-no-miko.livejournal.com
Awwww. Vivid, painful little drabble. I like the touch of beauty at the end in contrast to it all.

Date: 2012-09-24 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com
Great Danny-focused drabble.

Date: 2012-09-24 11:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com
Epic Danny-centric drabble

Date: 2012-09-26 05:57 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Danny neck smile)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Aw, poor Danny. But I'm glad he had a moment of almost niceness.

Date: 2012-09-27 03:10 pm (UTC)
celeste9: (PriWriMo: danny)
From: [personal profile] celeste9
Aw, great look at what his life might've been like. I like that he can find some appreciation for some of it, at least sometimes.

Date: 2012-11-13 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] basched.livejournal.com

This was really lovely. :) Nicely done.

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