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Title : Letting Everything Go
Author : freddiejoey
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : PG
Characters : Becker/Sarah
Disclaimer : All done for fun
Spoilers : None
Warning : Angst
A/N: For the P100 challenge 282: I Have A Bad Feeling About This.




You try to resist.

A thousand reasons why you shouldn’t be doing this pillage your mind.

And feverishly you wonder where this urge springs from.

But again the lure proves irresistible.

Sarah’s inveigling whispers ring in your ears.

Her hands scorch your skin with pleasure.

She’s so lovely and so full of longing.

You’re utterly lost.

It may be ‘Becker’ that she shouts as the brink beckons, but it’s always Danny’s name that she whimpers later.

When she’s gripped by dreams………..or nightmares……….

Tomorrow you’ll regret it.

For now you just close your eyes, pull her close

And let everything go………….

Date: 2012-09-30 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com
Lovely angst.......

Date: 2012-09-30 01:58 am (UTC)
clea2011: (Default)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
That's lovely and angsty. Poor both of them!

Date: 2012-09-30 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Nicely angsty!

Date: 2012-09-30 02:18 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Fred - Series 5)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Oh ouch! That's gloriously angsty!

Date: 2012-09-30 02:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Ouch! Lots of angst.

Date: 2012-09-30 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Ooh, nice! Poor angsty Becker...

Date: 2012-09-30 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Oh, poor angsty Becker!

Date: 2012-10-01 11:42 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] captain tom ryan)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Ooh, very angsty!

Date: 2012-10-02 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Poor Becker, and poor Sarah. :( It must hurt Becker to know she's thinking of Danny. Beautiful.

Date: 2012-10-12 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com
Lovely but angsty.

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