http://freddiejoey.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002012-09-30 10:56 am

Letting Everything Go

Title : Letting Everything Go
Author : freddiejoey
Fandom : Primeval
Rating : PG
Characters : Becker/Sarah
Disclaimer : All done for fun
Spoilers : None
Warning : Angst
A/N: For the P100 challenge 282: I Have A Bad Feeling About This.




You try to resist.

A thousand reasons why you shouldn’t be doing this pillage your mind.

And feverishly you wonder where this urge springs from.

But again the lure proves irresistible.

Sarah’s inveigling whispers ring in your ears.

Her hands scorch your skin with pleasure.

She’s so lovely and so full of longing.

You’re utterly lost.

It may be ‘Becker’ that she shouts as the brink beckons, but it’s always Danny’s name that she whimpers later.

When she’s gripped by dreams………..or nightmares……….

Tomorrow you’ll regret it.

For now you just close your eyes, pull her close

And let everything go………….

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely angst.......
clea2011: (Default)

[personal profile] clea2011 2012-09-30 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
That's lovely and angsty. Poor both of them!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely angsty!
fredbassett: (Fred - Series 5)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2012-09-30 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh ouch! That's gloriously angsty!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch! Lots of angst.

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, nice! Poor angsty Becker...

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor angsty Becker!
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] captain tom ryan)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-10-01 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very angsty!

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2012-10-02 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Becker, and poor Sarah. :( It must hurt Becker to know she's thinking of Danny. Beautiful.

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2012-10-12 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely but angsty.