ext_185108 ([identity profile] xxcourtniexx.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] primeval1002010-03-10 10:11 pm

Challenge # 149: Rock

Title: My Rock
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge # 149: Rock
Characters: Lester
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Lester and Primeval are the property of Impossible Pictures. Though any spelling or grammar errors are mine.
A/N:My first ever drabble.


Lester sighed into his pillow as his wife ran her hands over his back. It had been one of those days at work, where everything that could go wrong, went wrong. A massage was just what he needed. She always seems to know exactly what he needs, when he needs it. She is the love of his life. The mother of his three children. The good in him. The reason in him. He could be himself around her. No arrogance. No need to yell. Just him, James Lester. She had broke down all his walls. His wife was his rock.

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles happily*

Oh Lester! A sweet little drabble.

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh is it your first time? <3 Congrats! But yes, nice job. Although I will add that the tense shifts midway through the drabble, at 'seems to know'. ;D

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* I'm very leery of tenses when I'm writing, because I'll do a similar shift and not realize.
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[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2010-03-11 05:27 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, that's really sweet.

And welcome to the community! You now have a shiny new author tag :D

[identity profile] echo-fangirl.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
How lovely! Lester's wife is such a mystery, isn't she?

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 08:44 am (UTC)(link)
That's sweet!

And welcome . . .
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2010-03-11 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
That's nice :)

Welcome to the comm!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 10:12 am (UTC)(link)
That's such an interesting take on Lester's marriage. So often it's portrayed as broken around here.

Oh, and welcome!

[identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww, that's lovely!

Welcome to the comm.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, beautiful. And I bet he is her rock. *sighs happily*

Welcome to the comm!

[identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww *melts* Lester you are too adorable.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
awww, that was sweet.

[identity profile] 6th-dr.livejournal.com 2010-03-11 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
such a nice warm fuzzy drabble!

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2010-03-12 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice!

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice drabble :-)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww that's lovely.
Welcome to the comm, I'm very glad you posted this.