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Title: The Hunger
Author: [livejournal.com profile] bella_farfalla
Characters: Jenny, Sarah
Rating: 18
Word Count: 100 + 100
Warnings: Horror
Disclaimer: Sadly I own nothing.
Spoilers: None
A/N: Written for challenge 154 – past challenges, using challenges "42 - The Writer's Challenge (write a genre/character you don't normally)" and "88 - Hunger". The genre I went for was horror. No it’s not vampires, it’s ZOMBIES! Can I get a HELL YES? No? Never mind then.



It was sickening to watch. Sarah was shovelling food into her mouth, barely stopping to chew, unidentifiable juices running down her chin.

Jenny stared from behind the safety of the one-way glass, absent-mindedly scratching at the bandage on her hand from where Sarah had bitten her earlier.

They didn’t know what was causing Sarah’s ravenous hunger, the doctors and scientists couldn’t find any trace of a virus or parasite.

Suddenly Sarah looked up, her eyes wide and bloodshot, staring straight at Jenny, though she knew she couldn’t see her through the glass.

Jenny prayed they would find a cure soon.




Bright. Sharp. Cold. Hungry, so hungry.

Something I was supposed to be doing? But who am I? I had a name. What was it?

It doesn’t matter anymore. Nothing matters. Nothing but the hunger.

I keep eating but it never goes away. Nothing I eat has any taste, the food turns to ash in my mouth.

All but one thing. Her. When I tasted her blood and flesh it filled my body with life, for a moment I could almost remember who I was.

But they’ve locked me away, and every second I lose more of myself to the hunger.

Date: 2010-04-17 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Of course you can have a 'hell, yes!' Yay for zombie!fic *g*.

Date: 2010-04-17 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spirited-lizard.livejournal.com
These are both so good! I enjoyed it very much! :D

Date: 2010-04-17 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Eeep! Scary fic :-) Nicely done - in a nasty-zombie sort of way. But I fear for Jenny....

Date: 2010-04-17 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unseen-quill.livejournal.com
Jenny prayed they would find a cure soon.

Ironic understatement there. :D

Zombie!Fic! Love it! :D

Date: 2010-04-17 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Scary zombie-fic! Meep for Sarah and soon meep for Jenny too.

Date: 2010-04-17 10:25 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Jenny)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
*screams and runs away* That was way too scary!

*g*

Date: 2010-04-17 11:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zoi-no-miko.livejournal.com
Ooooh, nice work with zombie!fic !

Date: 2010-04-18 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunsets-dinos.livejournal.com
I already told you but eeeeeee, great fic even if it scared me to death. lol I don't do horror very well...

"absent-mindedly scratching at the bandage"
That bit totally made me think of Piper. S1, remember? The Wendigo ep. lol

Date: 2010-04-18 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com
this definately sounds more plausible (Zombie POV) than what I did. (different fandom)

superbly-well-written drabbles.

I'd hug Sarah, but she'd bite me.

Date: 2010-04-18 07:29 am (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Scary fic is scary!

Date: 2010-04-18 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
OMF. *flails* LOVE the zombie!fic! And the one from Sarah's pov was just great.

Date: 2010-04-19 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Eek! Scary, but very nice :)

Date: 2010-04-20 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Oh Bravo! I love both of these, especially the Zombie!Sarah viewpoint. But Jenny's segment is nicely doom-laden too.

Date: 2010-04-20 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
Oh, oh, I hope Jenny didn't get infected by the bite. Zombie!Sarah is very scary.

Date: 2010-04-21 08:41 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (stephen and nick)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Eeek x100!

Date: 2010-04-23 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com
HELL YES! Very creepy, VERY zombie. I love that you did one from Zombie!Sarah POV. The horror genre doesn't have enough of that.

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