[identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] primeval100
Title: Barren
Author: Kez
Rating: G
Character(s): Nick Cutter, Stephen Hart
Genre: Gen
Challenge: 194 - Naked
Warnings: N/A



Cutter hated this place. It was barren, empty nothingness, where even the trees stood naked, not a leaf, nor berry to be found. If not for the energy bars they all carried in their kit, they'd have starved by now. In another couple of weeks, if they didn't find something they'd starve anyway.

Stephen never placed blame, never complained about the lack of food, the struggle for water, the clothes they were damaging or destroying as they scrambled over dry rock searching for relief.

Cutter hated this place, and he hated that it was his fault they were stuck here.

Date: 2011-01-20 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Eek, I hope they get home soon. Lovely atmosphere/descriptions.

Date: 2011-01-20 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Eek! Fix it! Now! Get them home!

Date: 2011-01-21 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
Oops! Good on Stephen.

Date: 2011-01-21 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] far-mountain.livejournal.com
Nicely done. I love the description of the setting and you captured Nick and Stephen perfectly!

Date: 2011-01-21 09:18 am (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Eeep, poor boys!!!

Date: 2011-01-21 01:24 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-21 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
Eek! I'd hate it too. But at least they have each other.

Date: 2011-01-21 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
*meep* I hope they get home okay!

Date: 2011-01-21 10:10 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (StephenNick)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Yikes! That was bleak! But in a good way, naturally... *g*

Date: 2011-01-22 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
eek! That doesn't sound good...

Date: 2011-01-23 12:16 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (helen cutter)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Oh noes! Poor boys!

Date: 2011-02-12 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Oooo - that's so intriguing and I hope you continue it!

I hope they take the opportunity to talk properly to each other ;)

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